Wednesday, May 4, 2011

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Coltrane's reading, fathers are becoming in their children's lives. As the reading was saying that, back then, fathers took more care of their children as women, because women was working and had to do stuff that was needed for the family. But in today's society I both, well I am trying to say that fathers and women we will always be their for the children. Also in today's society, fathers are becoming more close with their children and being with them in everyday life.
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  1. Miss BMay 6, 2011 at 4:10 AM

    There are some ideas here which Coltrane mentions in his article. But your blog post is undeveloped and poorly written. You were asked to used the claim that you and your group discussed in response to Ying Ying's question-what causes and changes fathers' involvement in children's development- as a topic sentence of an argumentative paragraph and support that idea with examples-in MLA style-from Coltrane's reading. Please redo this post in order to receive credit.

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